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I open my eyes to him caressing my cheek
He smiles down at me
and kisses my lips
I breath in his wonderful scent and sigh
We stare into each other eyes
and he pulls me into his arms
We sit there exchanging hearts
and promises to stay an Eternity
in each others arms
Suddenly you wake up with a jolt
the monitor beeping again
in the white room
The Doctor pulls away the D-fib. and tells you
"He didn't make it,
nor did the drunk driver that crashed into you guys.
Your the only survivor."
He leaves and tears swell up in your eyes
"He's gone" you whisper over silent tears
You close your eyes to try to stop the pain
and feel a hand whip away a tear
and his whisper saying "An eternity, remember."
- by Charolette Strauss |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: Eternity
- Artist: Charolette Strauss
- Description: it's one of my favorite works i have done and it's made some people cry, i just hope you enjoy it. ^,..,^
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: eternity
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Comments (4 Comments)
- HeartInHandNotInMouth - 12/08/2008
- omg that is sad... but you know... thats really touching to all the people who are in love xP lol not saying i am but, thats a really nice poem smile beautiful ending btw good job! id love to see u write a story based on this tho. that story would prbably become one of my favs if u wrote it lmao
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- DiScOmBoBuLaTed FLanJeEz - 12/08/2008
- good job very sad
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- turtleboy777 - 12/07/2008
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AMAZING 5/5
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