THE PAIN OF LOVE

• Artist: AnarchyPI-CCCXIV
• Description: ive had this one in only one book so far but im hoping to get more publishers to want to publish it cuz it is touching
  i wanna c what the world of gaia thinks of my work
  leave comments and ratings plz
  thank u
• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: pain love

until we meet in heaven there is nothing left to say
until the day you come back home I never want to pay
the price of love and hate alone
is enough pain for me to take unknown,
unknown thoughts of love and sacrifice
killing me with a hand-held knife
it bleeds to my brain,to my hands,to my face,
I feel I'm getting pounded with unknown hate
but if love is there to stop the bleeding
I will be on my knees with unwanted pleading,
I loved you so
but you still don't know
if love was me,
I would be alone?

Comments

[hidden32]

so touching it touched my heart i sent it to my friend as said before keep up the great work

[Saphire_AsianPrincess]

that's really good poetry. Its is deep but well writen as well , keep up with the writing =)

[dead jester13]

prety good its rly deep

[Alyssa_omg]

i like it
it makes you stop and think
a good writter does that to you
i like it
keep writting things