Just Call Me 'No Name'

• Artist: I Wanna Brownie
• Description: Sometimes, I feel that people tend to feel alone. This is what I'm talking about.
• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: just call name

I tend to be alone,
No missed calls on my phone
No one dries up my tears
Or scares away my fears
Not kissed good night,
Don't do anything right
Yes, filled with shame,
Don't have a sexy frame,
Hardly any friends,
No day with a good end,
I'll always be the same,
The same kid 'No Name'.

Comments

[Xxhidden_wingsxX]

great job!! i sometimes wonder about the people who just don't fit in and are always picked on. it makes me so sad.

[mexicantacos2003]

i tend to rate people harshly when they write dark poems
the only reason why i do that is because they always
leave out the hope. "always be the same"? no.
we all change. we are always constantly changing.
but i like this poem. people learn from this poem;
"No Name" is usually the name of a weapon, usually a sword
which in contrast is a link to history and facts. learn this well.
imagination is based on reality.

[Nikki4815]

A lot of people will be able to relate to this. Good job. Rate back? Just check my gallery.

[KaneDS]

...lawls *at sydney* nice poem

[mychocolatesparkle]

I agree that it has a good rhythm. I like it. And people do tend to feel alone. Thank you for making a voice for those who are alone.

[tksunshine93]

This is quite good...and I do think a lot of people could probably relate to it so good job....the rhythm is good too