Love

• Artist: nintendo_freak64
• Description: What falling in love might be like
• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: love

What does love feel like?
A question I ask myself every single day.
The people I know that are in love can't tell me the answer.

I imagine it to be the greatest feeling on the planet.
Waiting, thinking, wishing
That it would come for me soon, maybe sooner than I thought
I wait for the day when he'll hold me in his arms
And tell me that he loves me every night.
And when I can tell him the same thing.

Sometimes I think "will it ever happen for me?"
Well, let's just see.
I have to wait patiently.

Comments

[Anastasie Boulay]

Very good, although I have to agree with "a peace remaining" in the sense that you need to express more of yourself in poetry. Poetry is a very deep thing, and love is a very strong emotion, and I kinda expected more. But it's a very nice start.

[a peace remaining]

This is barely a poem. It seems more like a line of blathering thoughts. You say you wonder what love feels like, but don't tell-- show! Wonder in IMAGES, not thoughts. Poetry is supposed to illustrate emotion, not ramble senselessly. Good grammar and spelling 2/5