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A face surrounded by others
In a place I can’t remember
Watching me with a look of disgrace
The reason why I can’t seem to trace
Minutes pass
The feeling of being watched hasn't stopped
Toped quickly by my fear
Two more minutes pass my fear growing stronger
Like a spear it stabs me
My fear turns to pure horror
I glance at the face
My heart increased it's feared pace
As I stare back at that horrid face
My glance returns to my hands
My fear winning as they begin to shake
My mind screaming for answers I can’t make
For a face surrounded by others
In that one place I can’t remember
- by Queen_Plum |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/04/2008 |
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- Title: the face
- Artist: Queen_Plum
- Description: i was hit with a stroke of inspiration while waiting for my school bus.....please rate and comment
- Date: 12/04/2008
- Tags: face
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Arctik Fox - 12/14/2008
- wow. its creepy. i like the ending how it kinda just leaves u hanging
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- dark eclipse - 12/07/2008
- Very good. There are a few places where it is a bit akward, but you have talent. Keep writing. =]
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- Shinedown_grlie - 12/06/2008
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I don't exactly get the meaning, but over all its pretty good.
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