Her Ending (Sucide)

• Artist: Celtic MufFin
• Description: I wrote this on the spur of the moment and would loved to get others opinions on it. I was inspired to write this poem because of one i read by another person that said in the discription that their poem is how they think someone who is sucidal would feel. having been there myself i can say personally this is how i felt
• Date: 12/03/2008
• Tags: ending sucide loss

She sits down and looks upon her life
she only sees her suffering and her strife

she wonders how is it that she was left here
But a Smile shows on her face for she knows the end is near

shes so sick of crying that she only sheds a single tear
As that tear falls down her cheak she know no one is near

She finds the razor and knows she only has a little time
She cuts herself and she feels sublime

she sees the door at the end of the path
Knowing she will never see her mothers wrath

The blood runs down onto the tile
And all she can do is smile

she'll never want to turn back she'll never makes a sound
its all done and soon she will be found

Comments

[Celtic MufFin]

Thanx alot you guys for your feedback it is nice to know that im not as alone as i used to feel

[Seras_Victoria12485]

It's a sad, but a reality to some. "The pain is such a sudden rush for me," (Eminem) and that's all they know; but like I said, it's sad. Good poem overall.

[Dragon_Fears]

Its a really good poem. I felt the feeling alon time ago.
But i was just oblivios to others cause they felt the same. So now i smile so together we can move on.

[Dragon_Fears]

No matter where you are, remember this, your not alone.
At times we feel really alone but we forget this pain is something we share.
We may not even care, what becomes of us, but there are people who could still share this pain. And together hearts will mend.

[HarajukuGirl92]

Great Poem.Sad message. 5/5

[Alexsandria the dark wolf]

I luv it! It brings back memorys

[The Darke Assassin]

I remember having had feelings to do that long ago. It brings a pain to my chest knowing there are others out there who even entertain the thought as I once had. Over all it, had the feeling deep inside.