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Every Action
tugs on that eternal web,
shifting the strings near it.
Ripples are created,
that grow into waves
churning in that eternal sea.
The waves crash on the shore,
eating away at forever.
Slowly it crumbles.
Forever fades away,
leaving only nothingness.
nothingness gradually slips away,
revealing a future
that reflects only the past-
the past forever that faded away.
An eternal cycle.
It never stops turning.
Not for us,
not for anything.
- by Akiko-infinity |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/01/2008 |
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- Title: Every Action
- Artist: Akiko-infinity
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WARNING: I have already won a county-wide contest with this, so don't steal it, because i have proof that it is mine.
This is a Free-verse poem i wrote in creative writing class. Please let me know what you think! - Date: 12/01/2008
- Tags: every action poem freeverse life
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- x__C r e a m - C h i - 01/21/2009
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Nicely written.
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- SakuraIchigoRyu - 12/03/2008
- try not to repeat words so many times. It's good, but could use a bit of improvement.
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- The Huntress Artemis - 12/01/2008
- wow...thats all i can say is wow... 5/5
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