Men/Boy

• Artist: iGummyBear xD
• Description: This poem means that you cannot just go straight to the top. You have to start out low and work yourself up. I hope that yall see that no one startes out good at somehing. You have to work at it to get good. So when you start something and you suck. Don't give up...... keep trying.
  
  The difference between a man and a boy is the lessons they learned. My father taught me plenty.
• Date: 12/01/2008
• Tags: menboy

I look into my heart to see who i am
And what i see is nuthing but a man
i am not eight-teen yet
but im am sure not ten
but what i see is nuthing but a man
i treat women how they want to be treated
and meet there every need
so what they see in me
is not a boy.....
but yet a man
i love my life just how it is
but i would not be a man
if i was not a boy

Comments

[linkinpark865]

i rlly like it

[iFrozen_Angel]

I don't think a poem needs to have a long description, or not one at all, I think if you're really a good poet, your poem would explain itself. Your poem didn't do that.

[the_toxic_shockartist]

your grammar discpicable the meaning is great work on your grammar puntuation and you'll do amzing stuff

[Phantom Owl]

I understand. it is beautiful <3

[o Taichi o]

nods* nice. (;