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You told me you love me,
You told me you care.
You told me I am the one,
With your infatuating glare.
I believed in you
Keep holding on what I believe is true.
But what is this happening now?
Is this really you?
You promised me many things
Make me believe on all your lies.
I'm all alone and empty
Now that you're telling me goodbye.
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- by hers POSH14 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: Goodbye
- Artist: hers POSH14
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Description:
I've wrote this a just while ago. I just felt like submitting it
here.=]
It's my first submission here. Feel free to critisize my work.
heehee. and oh, comment and vote.
TC you all.=3 - Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: goodbye
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- hers POSH14 - 12/20/2008
- ~aw,thanks. =]
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- Artemis_012 - 12/03/2008
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that is a AWESOME poem
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- Xxx__Mitzu__xxX - 12/01/2008
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Nice!
I didn't know you can rhyme!
HOLY CRAP YOUR AMAZING!!
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- Nikki4815 - 12/01/2008
- I seriously liked it!!! It is really good, so you get five golden stars, a pat on the back, and good luck for the next ten years ^^ Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"
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- hers POSH14 - 11/30/2008
- o_O
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