the hurt

• Artist: Fakku Boy
• Description: I thought up this but i want everyone to give me their opinion ^^
  and also I was inspired by evanescence ...
  so i took some lyrics off some songs of hers!
• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: immortal

I've done the right thing,
at least I think I did,
Everything I do I still think of him,
I tell myself he's gone,
but he isn't,
he's still in my mind.
I want these thoughts to go away,
but i can't stand the fact he's gone.
i want him back.
I was wrong,
but I broke up with him,
I can't go back to the life i once lived,
All the hurt he gave me .
His face haunts me in my dreams
I've tried so hard to tell myself that he's gone
But though he's still with me
I've been alone all along

Comments

[Singaporean]

3/5

[Singaporean]

im sorry it doesnt really rhyme.O: only a little still, i can see some evanesence in there

[Nikki4815]

nice poem. I give it a 5/5. Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"

[Aexel Kaisunaki]

NEEAAHAHAHAHAAA!!!! just go bang your head on something and leave all the horrible s**t in the past behind. Take this from a very wise man... Remember your past, you will be weak, forget the past and look ahead, you will stay strong. that was written by ME! ^_^ beautiful poem though. just dont let that s**t get to you kid. trust me, ive been there and done that. *wink*

[Fakku Boy]

i dont miss him gawd dammit!!! i was bored stare

[ChocoCoveredCherry LOVE]

ol Clair its sounds that way....(wat Riaishott said) LOL JK JK but its pretty. Evanescence rocks!!

[riaishott]

oh claire you really miss him im so sorry