My torn heart

• Artist: Lilyann87112
• Description: sometimes we feel this way. when we're all alone, no one really knows how you feel. well sometimes this is exactly how i feel . . .
• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: torn heart

oh the gentle winds beneath moonlight skies,
Do you not hear my mournful cries?

underneath the branches here about
do you not sense my fear and doubt?

Beside glistening riveres and sparkling streams
Do you not hear my mournful screams?

'neath these twinkling stars,
do you not feel my jagged scars?

its scattered accross moonlight skies
accopmanied by heartfelt sighs

its lost among the stars this night
too far to ease my quiet fright

no gentle winds, seek not my heart,
For simply . . . it is torn apart

Comments

[Devilish Reminder]

...seems framiliar like ive heard it before....not throwing any accusations htough. it's very very good. Powerful. Makes you think, huh? I love it. 5/5

[Indvick]

I agree, i often find myself debating on what is real and what is dream.
maybe - I just want some things to be a dream....

[Angel_Of_Witness_Patrol88]

wow it's so beautiful

[Xx-dark hybrid-xX]

all i can say is wow thats really something keep writing

[Isa Amarynthia]

Your poem is so Delicate ,yet so light and beautiful.

[Xx-unwritten law-xX]

OMG, it's beautiful!!
I wish my poems were this good
And btw, it's doubt not dought

[Lilyann87112]

hey how do you guys like my poem???