Hate

• Artist: 360Visionn
• Description: I just wrote what I was feeling at the time.
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: hate

Two shots of hate from a mouth as loud as a gun,
like an assasin ..... who does it for fun.
Two deafening blows in a war that has just begun,
life gone away .... I'm done.
Two red roses sitting on my coffin, the wind blows, leaving only one.
The world I know disappears like the setting sun.

Comments

[skeletoncookiegurl]

What he means is that hate can kill you. Some people have commited suicide because of bullies. Dude, that was awesome.

[xXMisa the Fallen AngelXx]

that was incredible perfect poetry

[Astictic]

Short but sweet. ^.^

[Mika Demon Sealer]

this is really good but at first it sounds like your talking about a person then you go on to it was really a gun so its kinda confusind