These Words...

• Artist: marshmallowXpie
• Description: This is a poem that I wrote a little while ago, maybe in August. And um...yeah, here it is. Sorry it's a little short.
• Date: 11/25/2008
• Tags: poem love crush

I’ve loved you since the day I met you
These words are mine, these words are true
Your hair, so dark, yet beautiful so
I love you more than words could show
Your eyes are so wonderful, I think I’ll melt
Nothing can match the way I’ve felt
Please take my hand, for I love you
These words are mine, and they are true

Comments

[Joreph]

good poem. expected lyrical scheme though. I hope he/she reciprocates.

[game roy8]

I LOVE IT!!! i hope your words ARE true to that special someone.

[HeartInHandNotInMouth]

no its perfect!!! lol a good poem doesnt have to be long smile it was very good!!! im not very good at ryhming but you did a terrific job smile . i love how you described the person too. in most love poems ppl dont do that, they just say how much they love them, but you did both so nice work. keep it up 17hopelessromantic79, you were able to say so much in so little and for that, bravo!