The Door

• Artist: CrazyRedPanda
• Description: Another poem for my friend with the heart disease but this one means more for him and my other religious friends and I love them to death thank you for always being there I love you Shane, Aaron, Jonsey, Corbin, Jeneca, Analyse, and Kim
• Date: 11/14/2008
• Tags: door

Death...
Some people want it
Some need it
Others fear it

But people like me
Embrace it...
Death can be a haven
An escape from the life you hate

But once you have it
You can never return
Your life as you know it...
Will be over

Then you will be in the passage of the Abyss
There will be three doors
The door to heaven
The door to reincarnation

And the door to hell
One door will open
But you wont know what one
So one will open

The only door you can go threw
Will it be the door to God's Kingdom
Or will it be the door to Satan's Castle
Maybe it will be the door to a second chance at life

Two out of three ways
You will not like the last door that opens
Because the door to heaven
Shall be the door you forever seek but never obtain

Comments

[AcousticGeek]

this is a good poem cause you must be always ready because we will never know when we will die... right?

[KayleyV2]

There is a good idea behind this, but the composition is poor. You introduce too many varying concepts, so it is difficult to understand what you are trying to get across. That is in honesty how I feel about the poem, and I'm not going to mask that. However, I think it's great that you care so much about your friend. I wish the best for him, and I am sure he and your friends are glad to have as dedicated a companion as you. :]