Rain

• Artist: GriffonLord
• Description: A song I wrote yesterday, i don't think its that bad.
• Date: 11/13/2008
• Tags: rain

Its a beautiful day for a rainstorm
When you're walking in the park
Its a beautiful day to be someone
with a voice as sweet as a lark
Its a beautiful day for a heartbreak
to be left alone in the dark
its a beautiful day for a rainstorm
as you walk alone in the park

and the rain falls down around me
but i'm still looking for the sun
and after all the pain it caused us
i still think that you're the one
and when i'm sad and lonely
i just hope you're having fun
and the rain falls around me
but i'm looking for the sun

its a beautiful night to be lonely
to be left alone in my bed
its a beautiful night for a war
between my heart and my head
its a beautiful night to miss you
to regret the things i said
its a beautiful night to be lonely
to be lost alone in my bed

Comments

[Dreams Wishes Nightmares]

This is a really nice and true song

[Fajiki]

wow... awsome, very nicely put together biggrin

[XxHoly_Ang3lic_H3art_22xX]

is sooooooooooooo cooooooool

[SydneyScribbles]

wow. Is it based on anything? It would be a amazing song. I don't know how people do this though cause I can only make up good lyrics when I'm not trying.

[Dreaming_cheshire1]

I love it! .... but there's a sad ending!

[mattm1990]

amazing.....

[TinyKawaiiNeko]

Ooh! I like this a lot-- there's definitely something you don't see so often here, and that's rythm. This has a good, melodic beat to it. It sounds like it would be a lot of fun to read out loud, and even more so to sing. :3 Kudos.