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This is for gold biggrin
and nothing else
i need some gold
for myself
If you don't vote,
I will be sad,
Without your vote,
I will do bad.
Give my a rating,
won't you please, xd
Give me a rating,
or I'll get down on my knees,
to cry:
heart "Good Ratings, PLEASE!" heart
- by Surguri Miyauchi |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/08/2008 |
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- Title: Only for Gold
- Artist: Surguri Miyauchi
- Description:
- Date: 11/08/2008
- Tags: random gold poor need
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Scarletgreen - 02/03/2009
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Good, except I dislike repetitive words. smile
You had please twice in there,
rhyming with the same word. wink
3/5. - Report As Spam
- philelectricguitar - 12/11/2008
- Nice =) That's pretty good! 5/5
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- Surguri Miyauchi - 12/11/2008
- i do know wat poetry is and ill post a nice poem if u like.i was in a weird mood and decided 2 make a fun poem. no hard feelings please. XD
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- Atomic_Kitten10 - 11/15/2008
- er...this is just a poem to get gold? obviously you don't know what real poetry is. 1 star
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- Asphyxiating Illusions - 11/08/2008
- Haha, its funny, and has a decent point, i join your cause!!
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- Surguri Miyauchi - 11/08/2008
- Sorry! I forgot a description....well, its pretty easy to tell what it is. smile
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