In times before the pain

• Artist: Paraleaf
• Description: Written in 2003 for my best friend whom I lost contact with. In 2004 she took her own life.
• Date: 11/06/2008
• Tags: times before pain

The pain I feel inside
Impossible to hide
It wasn't here before
Until you closed that door
In times without the rain
In times before the pain

The game you play is mad
It makes our world so sad
You’ll never see my tears
You’ll never know my fears
I never did complain
In times before the pain

You promised me my dream
It never was redeemed
Cause everything were lies
It made me want to die
My love was not in vain
In times before the pain

My life now fades to black
It’s never coming back
I'm wiping out my tears
I cannot feel my fears
One day we'll meet again
In times before the pain

Comments

[meizha]

I'm so sorry about your friend. There is something terribly wrong with this world nowadays and the kids suffer the worst. This is a good poem. Not very outstanding but filled with emotions and sincerity. 4 stars.

[Paraleaf]

thank you to all good commets biggrin

[Poison_Acid]

its so beautiful.

[tksunshine93]

oh i'm so sorry.....that's a terrible loss,i wouldnt be able to handle it....
very good poem.i like the repetition with the word pain.

[XxX_Solja_boi_XxX]

very nice i love it