Human Society

• Artist: ChronicOvadose
• Description: This is my first poem actually... I put it in the gaia forums and my only commenter said that it sucked.. That hurt, but I want to know if it really does suck. Please give your honest opinions.
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  The poem was originally made to be a song, but I might convert it into a song later. It's about my anger towards the dark underbelly of human society. Discrimination towards others for being different, mainly... Enjoy.
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  The Dark Underbelly of Human Society.
• Date: 11/01/2008
• Tags: dark underbelly human society

I have opened my eyes and I’ve seen the dark underbelly of human society,
Not be judging of one another, but to understand, that,
Pain is universal.
We can’t die this way.

Everyone is of the same value, no matter race, gender or personality characteristics,
We will all see, we must all see, that all have a right to be seen with true equality,
Learn from our mistakes, that is the reward of wrong doing,
Live and learn!

We are all of human blood,
I believe love will overcome our blind hatred.
We must learn of our differences, we must understand that,
Pain is universal.
Everyone is of the same value, no matter race, gender or personality characteristics.

We are all of human blood. We must see,
That all have a right to be seen with true equality,
Not to be judged,
Discrimination shall be elapsed.

Don’t lie to one ’s self,
Allow yourself to be totally yourself,
Don’t let society stop you from speaking your mind,
Don’t be afraid… Stand up for what’s right and live for yourself.

Hatred is the weakness. Hatred is the demise of human society,
Love others for who they are, and do not judge,
Love… and compassion… will overcome our hatred…

Comments

[Blood Of a Demonic Angel]

wooooooow if only the kids at my old school knew that
ver very beutifull 10/5
btw can you look at mine www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=100025785

[ChronicOvadose]

Thank you for the comment. This was my first poem and I've written a lot more. Most of my poems don't focus on the rhyming... Not a fan of it :/

[DemeaningMeaning]

bud, i dont know wat that first commenter was smoking, but it was good for a first attempt. Rhyme a little more and try to start ur poetic career small and get larger. I'm a beginner too, been writing for 2 years now. Just didnt publish much.