Rejection

• Artist: hearttakenv2
• Description: I don't know if this is as any good or if its jumbled up, You can interpert that for me, can't you ? ;3
  Also i cant spell, to save my life. I usually make poems after experieces i just had. So it can be fresh, and not stale. If yew know what i mean.
• Date: 10/31/2008
• Tags: rejection

Why do I feel this way?
Why am I the one feeling lone and hurt?
I should be, Calm
I should be, fine
But it's frazzled, I feel
It's sorrow, I feel

When I look at you I can't help but Feel,
a stab to my heart
I cannot help but feel,
guilt in my pleasure
Broken bones in my smile
Blissfull light in my Rain
Tender weaps in my laughter

I ended up saying, no
But you ended up walking away
Not another word for you to say

I felt bad
But you felt angered
I felt confused
But you felt betrayed
I felt off guard
But most of all, You felt rejected.

Comments

[hearttakenv2]

Thank you everyone. ;3

[babygurl2795]

Oh! I like it a lot! It's very good! 5/5

¬Nyaa!! ;3 whee

[ll_E R R O R_ll]

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- g oo d l uc k-

[XxDaRk_W0LFxX]

its wonderful =D

[SolsticeXII]

oh! very nice! I like it a lot! Very thoughtful sounding too! :3

[Crimson Crysis]

its so sad =( but very good.*thumbs up*

[vanessa_jacob]

very good