My Star My Angel

• Artist: crabtastically
• Description: A car wreck took my ex-boyfriends life. I wrote this the day I found out. :[ He was my first love and now he lives on in my heart. <3
  
  RIP
  Jake Calhoun
  (1991-2006)
  Forever in my heart.
• Date: 10/25/2008
• Tags: star angel

Nothing much to say, that you just went away. I tried to forget about you. It was too hard to do. I saw you yesterday, You were just sitting there. Tears fall out your eyes. I trembled slightly. Then sighed.You heard and looked my way. My knees were weak I swayed. My mouth felt dry, Nothing much to say.I licked my lips, once twice once more. You noted this and your eyes fell to the floor. Wipe away your tears. Triumph over your fears. We are together again. Now it's been two years. Car wreck had washed your life away. I cried and the tears never went away. Couldn't look at you, my heart would break. I loved you, till my soul would ache. Life just isn't the same, than when you were here, just yesterday. 'Cause every star I see, will be one more memory faded. And every raindrop fallen will never outnumber the tears I shed for you~

Comments

[luv2laffness]

im so sorry for your loss

[II FL3X II]

Wow...5/5

[I M Simi 2]

*hugs* T-T

[tksunshine93]

that was beautiful
so bittersweet, so much emotion
I don't think I would be able to live if my first love was taken away like that, I like to think I wouldn't care but while reading your poem I found myself crying and realized I would care and I know now I will always care and always love him. thank you
and I'm so very sorry for your loss, I won't say I understand how you feel because npo one can unless they've gone through what you have

[Moosh123]

This is so beautiful...
I'm so sorry for the loss that occured in 2006. I don't know what I would do if I lost someone that I loved...
I hope that you keep writing, because this is just amazing!
R.I.P.
Jake Calhoun

[x- r a y n ee]

aww he was ur first love? *hugs* i'd hate it if my first love died. ur so strong R.I.P jake calhoun

[ZeldaMaster9]

*sniff sniff
it's so touching to see how much you love him
and I understand what loss feels like... it can hurt a lot
and you are so strong to move on with him in your heart where nothing is forgotten(^_^)
you have family that loves you and comforts you when you
need it most so if your ever sad or feeling down hug a family member you won't regret it.