UnKnown Beauty

• Artist: _VincentRox_
• Description: I wrote this poem in the sixth grade. I thought it was quite beautiful.
  
  So i decided to see if Gaian's liked it as well.
  
  {/Side Note} This is a What~Am~I? Poem...but i'll post the picture of what it id regardless ^_^
• Date: 10/25/2008
• Tags: unknown beauty

UnKnown Beauty~

I'm elegant, I'm not clumsy like an Elephant. I am said to have quiet Beauty. So quiet it's like a light wind barely stirring the grass. My beauty is so delicate that if you hurt me I'll never come back again. It's alos said that My Wings hold a power quite undiscovered.


~_VincentRox_

Comments

[xIVooDooIx]

all and all, good poem, could use tweaks in places but nice job.
search me in the arenas under poetry and lyrics. comment my work please.

[lildrummerboy316]

thats really good

[Sutaa Yagami]

Interesting, nice poem. Were you trying to make a point in saying 'Beauty' a lot? I think you either had too many or too little, depending on which way you were taking it.