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I'm sitting on the floor, in my room.
I'm feeling down, I'm feeling gloom.
I'm all alone, there's no one here.
For what I'm about to do, I feel no fear.
The blade I'm holding, is very sharp.
Should I cut my hands, or my heart?
The blood is spilling, I'm near the end.
Goodbye cruel world, Goodbye dear friend...
- by DiexToxSurvive |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/21/2008 |
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- Title: Cruel world
- Artist: DiexToxSurvive
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Description:
heres another poem its not mine it belongs to babygurl2795 but for some reason she cant put it up herself so ill do it... honestly i dont like the 1st 3 lines a lot but it gets better. plz comment.
- Date: 10/21/2008
- Tags: cruel world
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Comments (5 Comments)
- xXsecret_artistXx - 01/31/2009
- tell babygurl2795 that her poem rocks.
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- saphirestar456 - 10/21/2008
- it is actually pretty god. good job!
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- Arobia - 10/21/2008
- It's kind of sad:'(
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- wasitacatisaw - 10/21/2008
- wow
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