lost love

• Artist: king_snake_in_shadows
• Description: this is a poem i wrote i long time ago and decided to post it because i personally like this poem i hope you do to sorry for the caps it how i wrote it and it adds a certain feeling so yea dont let that stop you from enjoying the poem
• Date: 10/18/2008
• Tags: lost love kingsnake poems noface

HOW LONG DOES ONE SEARCH BEFORE THEY RELIZE THE LOVE THAT THERE LOOKING FOR IS RIGHT NEXT TO THEM GAZZING AT THEM WANTING TO ASK THEM OUT BUT ARE AFRAID UNSURE IF ITS THE RIGHT TIME TO REVEAL THERE TRUE LOVE TO THEM WATCHING THEM AS THEY GO OUT WITH OTHER PEOPLE THEY WATCH HELPLESSLY AS IF U WANNA SAY BUT UR LIPS ARE STUNNED WITH EMOTIONS YOU WANNA SAY BUT YOU WANNA SAY IT RIGHT YOU WANNA SAY THAT YOU LOVE THEM WITH ALL YOUR HEART BUT AFRAID OF THE REACTION AND RESPONCE YOUR LIFE IS FULL OF ANGER EVERY TIME YOU DONT TELL THEM YOU CANT SLEEP AT NIGHT YOU DREAM ABOUT THE RIGHT RESPONCE AND IT FEELS SO REAL BUT YOU HEAR A NOISE AND THE WORLD TURNED BLACK AND U CANT SEE AND THEN YOU WAKE UP

Comments

[Paratox]

I don't like how it's on 'caps' but..it's pretty good.

[The Condom Hebi]

shut up papershelf
King The poem is amazing.
Good job and keep up the good work!! 4/5

[papershelf i c i c l e s]

...spell check. thatsa all ive got to say.