The Perfect Guy

• Artist: xXMiyuki-chanXxZ
• Description: I want a guy!!
• Date: 10/16/2008
• Tags: perfect

I wanna guy
whos perfect in every way
who will hold me close
and kiss me everyday
Who wont cheat
or hit me when hes mad
a guy who will be there
when I'm sick or sad
I dont care a whole lot
what he looks like
I just want a guy
who will treat me right
I have to be able to trust him
and I dont care what color hair
as long as I can look in his eyes
and know that he'll be there
I want a guy
who will ask if I'm okay
instead of ignoring me
and turn away
I just want someone
I can love forever
and will cherish every moment
being together

Comments

[Juanito Shet]

Uuuuggh, yeah, no. This poem sounds too childish, and by childish I mean teenager-ish. It sounds like what a teenager would write, and it sounds like what the average girl wants. Basically its an over-used topic. I don't really like it. 2/5

[loveblackbutterflies]

karclover27- I disagree. There is always someone perfect. It's just their flaws seem like an extra bonus to you.

[II Mai-Chan II]

OMG Nicole!!! I love it! Did u really make this up?!?!
Its sounds like u, and i wish for the same thing
See u tomorrow at school! XD

[katclover27]

Very sweet poem. I hope you find someone! Just remember no one is really perfect but some are close.