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Sleep my fallen angel
lay down next to me
hold my hand and close your eyes
and fall into a deep sleep
try and never wake up again
embrace your eternal dreams
and they will hide you from reality
so far away….
to never let the pain touch your soul
sleep my fallen angel
sleep, sleep
- by x-iiMz Solo |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/16/2008 |
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- Title: Sleep My Angel
- Artist: x-iiMz Solo
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- Date: 10/16/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- MongsInThongs - 12/22/2008
- woo...
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- Jaydey Dohnutz - 12/22/2008
- I LOVE IT 5/5
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- Im_Her_Vampy - 10/20/2008
- hi there i love the three poems (claps 10 times) i love how u wrote the poem keep up the cool work biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin 5/5 well i love them so 100/100 rating
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- iiSicky - 10/18/2008
- really nice writing i give it a five
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- whispers of an illusion - 10/16/2008
- It's very beautifully written. However, may I suggest you change 'try to never wake up again,' to 'try and never wake again.' It seems to flow better. Over all I love it. 5/5
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