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My Last Goodbye
The walls enclosing
The doors are closing
My heart is racing
My love is leaving
Now i am left
With my theft
To go and die
As my heart may cry
To say my last goodbye
As i get so high
I jump
And end in a thump.
Fin
- by Minty Strawberry |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/10/2008 |
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- Title: My Last Goodbye
- Artist: Minty Strawberry
- Description: Its a bout a girl who commited suicide because her husband or boyfriend left her.Please vote fairly tis my first time. =]
- Date: 10/10/2008
- Tags: last goodbye
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Kurenai Camille - 10/10/2008
- That.... is SOOOO sad. I LOVE IT!!!!
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- Mal de Mar - 10/10/2008
- awwww its so sad ....well u di great for the first time
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- Shiki_7 - 10/10/2008
- very good for a first time
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- Neko-Hime-Chan - 10/10/2008
- so sad...
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- selinarulesxD - 10/10/2008
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great poem! - Report As Spam
- Susumey - 10/10/2008
- Is very beautiful! ^-^ well done
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- ll Pie ll - 10/10/2008
- WOO SIS
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