Colors of the Crow

• Artist: CoffeeAndSpiders
• Description: It's sort of a reflection of myself.
  Apparently explaining it doesn't help so I'll let you think what you want about it.
  
  
  Don't be ignorant with your comments please. Thanks.
• Date: 10/03/2008
• Tags: colors crow

Such beauty
the colours of the crow
As it flies, it weeps



only I know
Unable to show
it's colours with glee

But I am the crow
And those colours are me

Comments

[CoffeeAndSpiders]

Ah Doctor, ya crack me up.

I understand that people will critique it. I expect it. Just wish it was more nice remarks than annoying critiquing sometimes.

[yUkHi]

One thing I forgot to add is that your poem express that.

[yUkHi]

Good. You shouldn't let one critic affect you coffee but however, since you are an artist and decided to make your poem viewable by the whole world you should expect criticism. Whether or not it's constructive. All criticism helps you become a better artist. It's up to you whether you can understand it. You should reconsider about letting people comment your poem if you don't like what they have to say.

[Neurv Damage]

Dude, Crows are black; They have no colors.

[CoffeeAndSpiders]

I'm not really trying to please anyone else, and just because one person or so doesn't feel the poem, It doesn't mean my poem is bad or not worth reading. I don't go for conventional metaphors or anything like that, and I try my best to make most of my work hard to understand. I feel that if everyone can get it just once by reading it, that I'm not doing my job as an artist. Some may disagree, but this is how I feel and nothing will change that.

[yUkHi]

A poem should be able to express whatever it is you want to tell us. You shouldn't have to describe the poem. It should be self-explanatory. I rated your poem a 2. I didn't feel it and understood it more after you described it.