Butterfly

• Artist: CoffeeAndSpiders
• Description: Not my best, but still very nice.
  
  There ya go.
  
  
  Don't be ignorant with your comments. Thanks.
• Date: 10/03/2008
• Tags: butterfly

Such gorgeous wing, with vibrant colour
You really are a sight to behold
Though I could stand in your beauty
and admire you 'til I grow old

I feel such empty gazing is unhealthy
So I'll gather myself and make my leave
I'm sure you don't need me anyway
You've got your flowers in this world you weaved

Why ever would you need the company
of such an unbecoming passer-by?
Surely you'll find someone to chase you as you wish.

But never I.

Comments

[Phinagin2000]

wow it's great biggrin ! 5/5

[CoffeeAndSpiders]

Okay, I think I get you. You use the rating system with caution. I get that.

I only included the description because I don't feel that most people are smart enough to really get it. But you're right, maybe I'll just take it off and if people have to ask, then I'll tell them.
Thanks again.

[yUkHi]

I would like to apologize for misinforming you. The thing show I rated you a 3 not a 2. Sorry about that.

[yUkHi]

Don't consider a two a low rating. Not rating you at all is worst than 2. Think of it that way. There are poems where I tell them I didn't rate them because I didn't feel their poem. Everyone has their own opinion. I am just expressing mine. I usually never rate a 5 unless I really feel the poem barely even a 4. Like I said, I really did enjoy reading your poem. Don't add the description, let the reader imagine and think about it. Great job coffee.

[CoffeeAndSpiders]

Thanks I guess. A two is a pretty low rating, but thanks anyway.
I just added in that to the description because I really feel people just don't get it most of the time.

[yUkHi]

Nice poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I usually just read the poem and skip the description because I feel that a poem should explain it self. Well done. I rated your poem a 2. Like you stated, " not my best, but still very nice." I look forward to reading more of your poems.