first poem

• Artist: Ceon101
• Description:
• Date: 09/30/2008
• Tags: first poem

The Entire World a Stage and the People Merely Puppets.

Many just blocks with strings in their hands.
All of them fighting for supply and demand.
And when all the hope in the world is thinning
It's the ones who got their strings cut that are winning.
The string less actors will grab ropes of silk
And will be pulled away from the sludge and the filth.
When the curtains fall and the remaining take their bow
The trap door will open and they'll fall down below.
The wood of their bodies will burn black as their souls.
The termites will swarm and fill them with holes.
New puppets will be set and the puppeteer will plan.
The curtains will lift and the play will start again.

Comments

[NakedJack]

Good writing, great art. Slant rhymes well used. Alot more people are starting to have the same outlook. Reality is nothing more than what you make of it, and if you let someone else tell you what to believe, then you have become a puppet.

[Xx_gameplaywolf_Xx]

that's deep. o.o cool though!

[xXHARMONIC blADE Xx]

very dark and heavy