Candy Canes And Gum Drops?

• Artist: Drunken Aunt Coral
• Description: The title has nothing to do witht he poem...
  
  Anyway.. yes it sounds stalkerish but hey. I am only human... Trying to write poetry, and failing miserably....
• Date: 09/28/2008
• Tags: candy canes drops

Look into my eyes
They only see you

Listen to my heart
The rappid pace is caused with you near

Taste my lips
For they taste for you

Feel my bare skin
For electricity is formed

Smell my new purfume
For it has your sent

Let me look at you
And I will take all in

Let me listen to you speak
For your voice will be rememberd

Let me kiss you once
For I would keep that taste forever on my lips

Let me hold your hance just once
So I can be alive

Let me hug you once
So that smell will never fade.


Now I write down this very note and tell you at the end,

I love you....

Comments

[Mamochia]

You spelled "rapid" "scent" and "hand" wrong, but other than those misspellings it's a very good poem ^_^.

[Raining Rainbow Skittles]

Your not failing. It's an excellent poem. I'm not that good myself. Read my lyrics and haiku's. Tell me they're crap. It's easy to do so. I'm rating you 5/5!