Let Me Go

• Artist: EmoVamp777QueenKitty
• Description: A poetic paragraph dedicated to the world.
• Date: 09/04/2008
• Tags: world home suicide heaven lord

I'm sorry, world,
that you can't understand me.
Let me go; let me leave.
I'll be happier in Heaven,
but I can't get there from suicide.
I wait for the day
when the world let's me go.
I'm better off dead.
I'll finally be home.
World, please let me go.

Comments

[VxMischiefLycanxV]

suxors, I don't even consider this poetry. Seems to be more like a hastily written emotard journal entry. Society is guilty when you kill yourself, not you. so go ahead and kill yourself. society is the murder here. You are not who you are, you are who society has made you out to be. coward.

[kikioblack]

It's nice and meaningful. Most of the world really doesn't understand.

[trant_or_henru]

I disagree with the message greatly but as far as the construction of the poem goes its decent enough to merit a 4 in my book. Good job.