I was walking on the snow

• Artist: Scar_Of_The_Heart93
• Description: this describe how i feel when my boyfriend left me
• Date: 08/30/2008
• Tags: walking snow

I was walking on the snow
that night was pitch-black, cooled
and the wind blow hard as it pressed through my heart

I was walking on the snow
with no glove and scarf to keep me warm
with a broken heart that filled with sorrow, rage and hate
tears fill my eyes when I saw loving couples went by
hoping that their love may survive in this world that has no love

Comments

[K e e - C h u L]

meow........

[Shuhasu]

there i was able to change the rating smile

[Shuhasu]

I didn't get a chance to read this before because of the mixup, since it was also cut off. Now that I have read it, I wish i could rate it again, because that is very good. I sympathize with that poem, cause Ive been alone for so long and still mad at the fact of what happened that cursed may in 2007 T^T.