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Fun Interrupted.
It is fun to see
What others claim
Do not exist
I revel in
A madness that
Claims many, releases few
Or, so I'm told
By the men in
the white coats.
But the others
Shimmering, etherial
They show me paths
Paths that exist
That others don't see
That don't exist.
I travel one
As we speak
I near it's end.
What will I see?
What will I have?
Peace, at last.
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- | Submitted on 08/20/2008 |
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- Title: Fun Interrupted
- Artist: the_darkns
- Description: Fun Interrupted is my first poem and it is still the one most others like i thought i may as well try it on Gaia and see what others think of it this is from my DA account
- Date: 08/20/2008
- Tags: madnessinsanityfuninterrupteddarkness
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- khonnen - 12/25/2008
- It doesn't completely rhyme, but not all poems have to. Great job! 4/5
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