An Answerd cry

• Artist: KarashiWhite
• Description: i wrote this pome because of my boy friend(Brent,akito momochi)
  i was always alone before i had him...i never realy had anyone to talk to...or to be with ...this expresses what i was like before i had him....and then he "Answerd cry"my cry....i love him soo much and we are stil together!!!!
  so i hope that you like it....i dont think that i am a good writer..but ill let you be the judge!!!!^^
• Date: 08/14/2008
• Tags: darkness alonelove cold heart

a lonely soul
a lonly heart
im always dreading the cold
i never wanting to be alone
crying out into a burst of tears
i was just hopeing that someone would here

drakness of the shadows
a lonely place to be
in hatred and sorrow
never being loved
always liveing in an empty soul
haveing an empty heart


untill someone heres my cryies
reaching into my soul with open arms
now i could never be alone
standing here loved in his arm
im nevre going to be cold
cause finaly someone has answerd my cryies


*i love you brent,you are my life!!!!*

BY:ME!!!!(NATALIE)

Comments

[2014_North_Star]

A few spelling mistakes, but aside from that it's really good
It's probably better than mine surprised

[miszunderrsztood_azn]

This would be really good if you fixed up ALL your grammar mistakes. I was too distracted by them. But really good effort. I like the idea and inspiration.

[Snow Pig]

oooooooooooooooooookk? 1st