Alone

• Artist: ThoughtlessEndeavor
• Description: I was readfing through "Whirlwind" and decided it needed some changes. I ended up changing the theme too, so it may seem the same but it's entirely different.
• Date: 08/11/2008
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No shoes,
No socks,
I walk across the cold stone.

Who am I?
Where am I?
How did this happen?
All these question that I can not answer.

I look up
And see dark clouds above me.

A sign,
A warning,
A storm,
A new danger.

As I reach out,
Rain drops on my fingertips.

The air gets colder and faster around me.
Rain pours as lightning breaks the sky.

Everything begins to spin,
And the dizziness that swept over me
Keeps me standing still.

Comments

[writervsworld]

i like it. good job! dunno whirwind, but that was really creative

[DJ Pure darkness]

i think its totally gr8