Our cycle

• Artist: trant_or_henru
• Description: The idea of the sun, its how we keep time our entire way of life revolves around it. Its a poem about human nature, we are good but we are conceited, greedy, and deceitful. Always looking for glory but always finding death.
• Date: 08/02/2008
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The sun will rise
And the day will go on
And men will tell lies
and men will build bombs

We might just forget
But some will remember
And they wont regret
When they burn us to embers

And those who survive
Will cover their heads
Fill books full of lies
And forget all the dead

Theres no compromise
You don't have to bet
Cause the sun always rises
And the sun always sets

Comments

[Aiko Nakamori]

I love the real message that is behind this! smile

[Singer LemonGurl]

DUDE if i could write poems this good in 30 seconds i would freak! Im giving you a five not because i give it to everyone but because i can fell something in it, you mite say you put no emotion, but i can feel something

[trant_or_henru]

This thing is crap... I made it in 30 seconds just to prove a point, that people will put a 5 star rating on anything, this is a terrible poem with no work or emotion in it. I could crank out 1000 more if i wanted its simple and not worth the 5 stars. If you don't know anything about poetry or lyrics why are you here voting for this crap and saying its good?

[DJ Hotplumpnicoleprimaj]

you r absoultely rite i am amazed by yo work it is very powerful great job???!!!lol