My Love... hypodermic needles

• Artist: xMoonsaultx
• Description: This was a poem i wrote about a guy i know. Isn't it always about a guy? I like to keep most of my poems sort. I hope there is no problems referencing drugs, and if there is, I'm sorry. I'm not saying drugs are good, Its a comparison to the addictiveness of drugs with this person I couldn't stop thinking about it. If this is aganst any rule, please inform me.
• Date: 07/28/2008
• Tags: crush love sappy tears addict

"My love for you reminds me of hypodermic needles."


Sappy poetry and tears from eyes buried into my pillow.
Feelings I’ve clawed my way past.
Thought this would be behind me.
The School-Girl crush from an immature mind and heart
I should know better....
But I find myself here again
Like an addict out of rehab,
I find myself at the dealer’s door
My love for you reminds me of hypodermic needles
Stuck in the arm and inject the poison
I know it won’t end well.
But I need you.

Comments

[laladropDEAD]

i like it
poems dont always have to rhyme
and you actually have to think about what your reading

[Frozen Lake]

Good, but bad.
I hope you're not a drug user.
You rhymed, not great.
I must say, you use caps in the poem, not in description, do you always type with i not I?
do you usually use a ' where is belongs?
Doesn't look like it, sorry, 4/5