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Two lips meeting to spark lights,
Two hearts forever entwined,
Two bodies cradling half a soul,
Together making it whole.
Getting forever lost in their lovers eyes,
Forgetting all of time,
Every touch making their heads spin,
Bliss surrounding them,
From the outside in.
A new kiss for each new day,
A thousand, “I love you”s they’ll say.
A million miles or just a couple feet,
Their love for each other never skips a beat,
Their love explained in a few short words,
Forever and always, I’ll be yours.
- by Sky Arliss |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/24/2008 |
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- Title: Lovers Love
- Artist: Sky Arliss
- Description: ~dedicated to rick~
- Date: 07/24/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- deactivated-28347834753 - 01/27/2009
- You shouldn't use 'on behalf' in that context, kid. But on to the comment. I agree; it's mushy and clichéd and just overall overdone. And not at all deep. Sorry.
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- Sky Arliss - 07/31/2008
- on behalf of the comment below mine... how does it sound like a hallmark card? and if it does then i'm happy to know my work is good enough to be used as such XD
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- Supernatural Superserious - 07/25/2008
- This reads like something one might read in a Hallmark card, and that's not a good thing. neutral
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- OMFGD - 07/24/2008
- vote for me and i'll vote for you! my poem is serendipity!
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- worior_of_darkness - 07/24/2008
- wow thats realy deep
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