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I'm tired of trying, i'm tired of crying. I might be smiling, but on the inside.. i'm dying.
When you see me I dissapear.
But when I see you, your crystal clear
What kind of trick is this?
Because it certainly isn't a magic trick
I love you, and all I need you to see
that all I need.. is you with me
- by DelicateDulaney |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/23/2008 |
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- Title: I'm Tired!
- Artist: DelicateDulaney
- Description: umm yea its my poem about two people in a relationship and the girl just about to give up on their love and just love;
- Date: 07/23/2008
- Tags: love tired relationships
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Comments (6 Comments)
- DelicateDulaney - 12/11/2008
- thnx ^^
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- Mr_Ice 2707 - 07/23/2008
- its nice 5 stars
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- masdur cheef - 07/23/2008
- very very nice
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- Onixia91 - 07/23/2008
- i like it 5 stars
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- theincrediblefloom - 07/23/2008
- I like the whole idea, it's very impressive. I think the 6th line needs a little work, but besides that, great job!
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- Sincerely Metalhead - 07/23/2008
- um...kinda plain...but not too bad, 3 stars
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