City Sleep

• Artist: fairywaif
• Description: I wrote this 3 years ago, when I was a freshman (in high school). I went to school really early because I had to catch the bus! So I saw all the morning 6:00 traffic, which inspired this poem.
• Date: 07/21/2008
• Tags: midnight city sleep lights cars

city lights
city streets
doppelganger headlights
chasing shadowy dreams

dark enfolds all
in the city-
the righteous
and wrong
come midnight.

Comments

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Needs a lot of work, but I have seen worse. Work on word choice and imagery. 2/5.