Love Is So Like Weather

• Artist: juntomregal55400bjk
• Description: It's just about how love is erratic and unpredictable , like weather and even if it's a lovely day for a picnic, it can start to pour down raining on the way to the park. Not that i go on picnics in the park. :P oh and in the last stanza I broke the rhyme scheme i was using because of the whole erratic thing. Get it? Love is unpredictable and so is the rhyme scheme of my poem. Yays.
  PLEASE VOTE & COMMENT :3
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: love zephyr weather simile metaphor

heart Love is like a zephyr,
a calm breeze passing by.
you smell sweet scents of heather;
you feel like you could fly.

A storm begins to brew.
Winds destruct and destroy.
You don't know what to do;
What's happened to the joy?

Temperatures rise,
The thermometer breaks.
Face to face with your demise,
Your heart really aches.

Lightning strikes as thunder rolls.
Rain pours and wind bites.
Being consumed by a black hole,
You've had too many sleepless nights.

A mist of rain graces the earth.
You're no longer so upset.
You look up at the cloudless sky.
If love was with out pain, what would it be worth?
Love, like weather, is unpredictable, yet
Beautiful even when it makes you cry. heart

Comments

[Pheobe-Sunlight]

awesome job. the rhyming is consistent yet doesn't take away from the depth and meaning of the poem. i love how the last stanza, although it breaks the rhyme scheme, rhymes as well. five stars, and it's now one of my favorites!

[juntomregal55400bjk]

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