Tasha

• Artist: the devls right hand
• Description:
• Date: 07/20/2008
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I heard you laugh
i heard you cry
i heard you yell
i heard you talk
these simple things seemed so sweet comeing from you
ur voice made me forget my problems and the world itself
your tears made me wish i could take away yourr pain
just to see u smile again
i saw your eyes
i saw your smile
i saw your face
your eyes seem to hold the universe itself, they are to
beautiful to be human
your smile brightend up my day and made me happy
your face is to beautiful to describe
i fell in love,
deeply
one look into your eyes and i was urs
mind body and soul
i would change for you i would give my world to c u smile
to hear you laugh
to hear you talk
to see your smile
to see your eyes

the days i let you down nearly killed me knowing
i was the cause of sadness in your life
knowing that i hurt the one person that brings
the sun up in the mornings
the one that makes the flowers bloom
the one that gets the birds to churp

when i see you smile i know everything is going to be ok
when i hear you laugh i know that everything is going to be ok
when i look into your eyes i know everything is going to be ok
when i see your face i see the face of a angel the face
that no words can describe its beauty

no one can compare to ur beauty
nothing can compare to ur smile

i would say i love you with all my heart but
i have no heart to love you with for my heart
i gave to you.

there is no creature as beautiful as you

Comments

[Unfound Dreams]

I think its really good, and it doesn't matter about the spelling, because thats what the poem from you, and thats part of what makes it beautiful. Keep it just the way it is!

[rosemidnight17]

this is a great poem. i do agree with fantasy. i would edit the poem because it would look so much more beautiful with the correct spelling! i really enjoyed it though. very romantics and beautiful. i loved the end.

"i would say i love you with all my heart but
i have no heart to love you with for my heart
i gave to you."

there is no creature as beautiful as you
"

[ChristOurSavior-LovesUs]

You didnt capitalize anything and I saw some computer talk in there like ur, u, urs, c, churp was mis-spelled. Which for the computer talk I will have to take off 2 stars(Sorry) but other than that I liked it a lot if you ever make another poem or song please dont use computer talk.