Dear Daddy:: [Letter 1]

• Artist: iRainbowDuckie
• Description: One of many letters I wish I could send to my father.
  
  You will most likely see more of these in the near future.
• Date: 07/19/2008
• Tags: dear daddy irainbowduckie

Dear Daddy,

I want you to know it hurts me less if you just stop calling.

The more you lie the more I lay there just bawling.

You say you love me, but you make me wonder,

If you really cared, you wouldn’t you sound sober?

You always told me that drugs only did harm,

Then why are you dealing them, growing them out on your farm.

That place was my home, a fun and sacred place,

Now it’s a memory, slowly being replaced.

My friends always hug me when I’m crying to no end,

And tell me this letter, I should really just send.

But I’m not brave enough, I don’t want to hurt you,

Because I would feel, I‘m being just like you.

But this sword is double bladed, my emotions are real,

This pain you’ve inflicted on me, I so badly want you to feel.

I’m too strong for my own good, that’s what they always say,

But really I’m a wreck inside, breaking in every way.

I wish you’d understand, I only have one daddy,

And your breaking my heart, I scream depressed and sadly.

If you really listened, and kept your solemn word,

Would you say you loved me? Daddy, please hug me.

Comments

[lumina_fire_fairy]

awwwwww thts so sad 5/5. i will pray to the gods for u to get tht hug tht u long 4. blessed be

[xXxXxbabexXxXx]

a child, whose heart has been broken, shows through in this poem..............its saddness would bring tears to many eyes................5/5

[Lianthco]

Thanks for the comment on my poem, my father and me don't have exactly the same problems word for word, but sometimes I wonder what he really thinks of us.Though, your poem is very touching, and its amazing how you show so much emotion in it. I hope that, if this story is true, that you and your father can be happy again and he will love you like you want. But anyway I love it. 5/5

[iRainbowDuckie]

Your comments almost made me cry. It uplifts me in unspeakable ways when people take the time to comment my work. Yes, it is a true story.

[Enchanted-By-Death]

This poem, though heartbreaking, has an amazing rythem, like a current that carries you along with it, and wether it is from truth or fiction you grasped the feelings and concepts so soundly, that you share them with your audiance, and they feel them as if it were their life. I wish I could give it more than 5. Very nice work.

[O-O celestial O-O]

is this a true story?if so i have a simalar one.

[NefariousShark]

Incredible . this poem... this letter... such emotion comes off it it make me want to cry... i'm touched. This poem is exploding with sadness... hate.. lonlyness. 5/5