Love

• Artist: tacit_tourniquet
• Description: My horrible description of a failed relationship lol
• Date: 07/19/2008
• Tags: love amanda montague

You were the yin to my yang
The dove among the black birds
The heart that beats within me
I loved you

Yet part of your yin is in my yang
It's spotted with black
It beats faster and faster
But you tried

And my yang will never corrupt your yin
Until the dove becomes black
And suddenly the heart fails
Only to kill me

Pericardium~<3

Comments

[crazyrandomness]

i like it very much, except the connection with yin and yang...it's to average try using different opposites...or well don't but yeah i was just trying to help sorry if you didn't want that...
if you would like, will you read my poem my angel,my fallen,my demon?and tell me what you think?

[bob756]

this sounds kind of gross but without that its good lol 5/5

[The Lady Andromeda]

It's pretty