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We spin faster and faster
until we fall out of orbit
like the Hubble, only illogical,
unplanned,
and burning with passion
(not atmospheric friction)
upon reentry.
Stellar photographs,
but better intentions.
If we could only transcend
the black and far between.
- by Spirit-senpai Albarn |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/19/2008 |
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- Title: Out of Orbit
- Artist: Spirit-senpai Albarn
- Description: It's short, but to the point.
- Date: 07/19/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Littlepurplestars - 11/13/2008
- its really good. i write a lot too and im very good at it, so if i say yours is good, then its good.
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- Spirit-senpai Albarn - 07/20/2008
- Yee! Thanks.
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- StevieHummingBird - 07/20/2008
- it made me smile smile
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- Spirit-senpai Albarn - 07/19/2008
- I hate cliche "love/above" poems; songs even. There has got to be another way to put it.
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- lifesux23 - 07/19/2008
- not just a traditional love poem, i like it
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- Spirit-senpai Albarn - 07/19/2008
- Why thank you.
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- Sapphire Rune - 07/19/2008
- OMG! I love your work too! The imagery is soaring! Oh and celestial references = <3
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