Koi Fish / The Rushing River

• Artist: Unsliced Bread
• Description: These are just two poems (Hiku ((ugh i can never spell that correctly)) ) that i wrote. I really love em...i hope u do too =D
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: poems fish river water love

Koi Fish
A Symbol Of Love
That Goes Beyond Inner Souls
And Finds Peace For All

The Rushing River
Flowing Silently
Down The River Of Hate And Love
A Wetland Of Dreams

Comments

[sweet little mouse]

The capitalization of every word was distracting, but once you get past that the expressions of those two things are very inspiring. smile 4/5! ^-^

[fizznomore]

Why is every word capitalised?

[On Frail Wings Of Vanity]

I'm not a big haiku (Thats how you really spell it) fan, mainly because they're too short for me, but yours are really good. I love them, 5 stars.