Childhood Memories

• Artist: Shokinari
• Description: This was something that I wrote when I was reflecting back on my childhood when there were problems between my parents, and thus inspired the creation of this poem.
• Date: 07/17/2008
• Tags: childhood memories

The lying…
The fighting…
The child is hiding…
But nobody seems aware…
The yelling…
The screaming…
The child is pleading…
But she is ignored with a glare…
The crashing…
The smashing…
The child is thrashing…
But she is put down with a stare…
The violence…
The blood…
The screeching of sirens are misunderstood…
The handcuffs…
The jail…
The child says her final farewell…

Comments

[Fredella]

wow
i'm speechless...
seriously speechless
cant even type properly
5/5!!!!!

[xwolfz]

powerful. but i think if you used just one period after the parts like The lying ( only the lines with a verb) would be more effective, it's just a suggestion so you don't have to worry about, this poem was really good i hope you'll write more and i hope every thing is better with your parents ...