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The veil between us is thin tonight
So I step through from my world to yours
I find you laying on the floor
Staring at the ceiling
I can't believe those dead-looking eyes are yours
I sit beside you on the floor
But your gaze remains trained on the ceiling
You can't feel me beside you tonight
I try to pull you off the cold floor
To pull your eyes from the blank of the ceiling
But you do not realize my efforts tonight
You can not feel my hand upon yours
I see my new world calling through the ceiling
But I will remain with you tonight
Even though you can't feel my body so close to yours
I lay beside you on the floor.
- by Canned Toast |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: The Floor
- Artist: Canned Toast
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Description:
A sestina-type style using the words: tonight, yours, floor, and ceiling.
C&C is appreciated. - Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: tonightyoursfloorceiling
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ginger_forest - 01/25/2009
- Wow. I think this is good. =]
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- Dragon legs - 07/16/2008
- pretty good
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