I'll Get Up Again

• Artist: amiejhan
• Description: I wasn't thinking much while I was writing this. Actually, I didn't think at all. I pretty much doodled it down. Especially the chorus, it's quick, simple and quite stupid.
  Rate as you like.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: love hate relationships betrade life

I've fallen twice and above.
The pain that comes with love,
Is the horrible cause.
Yes, love does have its flaws.

I've gotten up every time,
Thinking everything'd be fine.
But I was so, so wrong.
Because you didn't stay long.

Why did you do this... ?
Why did you do this... ?
Why did you do this...
To me... ?

How could you do this... ?
How could you do this... ?
How could you do this...
To me... ?

You went so far,
but only to break my heart.
Your smile was only a lie.
And I let it fool my eyes.

I'll keep falling.
And I'll keep rising.
But that won't stop the pain,
Nothing'll ever be the same.

Comments

[-x- Fridge -x-]

It would be a lot better if you changed the chorus. Having "How could you do this...?" or "Why did you do this...?" repeating over and over with no variation, makes it less enjoyable. Other than that, good job.

[BloodyBlackAbyss]

Very nice. I like it.

[Blood Of a Demonic Angel]

thats beytiful by reading it i would have never known u had just wrote it down