Poor Little Alice

• Artist: Little Ema Skye
• Description: I'm an Alice in Wonderland fanatic.
  I thought this up after reading the book.
  
  
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: alice wonderland

Poor little Alice,
is she quite right in the head?
Bad hit, bad drugs, bad story, bad end.
Following down the mouse’s tail
All the way to the “not”
up, down, up, down.
Bottle labeled ‘drink me’
Falling down the rabbit hole.
Marmalade jar, empty. Down she falls.
Bad hit, bad day, bad drugs, bad end
Why? What did Alice do?
I can’t help think.
up, down, up, down.
Bottle labeled ‘drink me’
White Rabbit
No where to go,
Running always late
Bad luck, bad luck, bad day, bad boss.
Tick tock tick tock
watch the clock
up, down, up, down.
Bottle labeled ‘drink me’
Follow orders
All lined up and down
Where’s that rabbit going?
How many are there?
Bad day, bad boss, bad job, bad life.
Tick tock tick tock
watch the clock
up, down, up, down.
Bottle labeled ‘drink me’
The Mad Hatter
Because we’re a little
or a lot
crazy.
Bad drugs, bad day, bad guests, bad job.
New cup, New cup!
Move seats
Tick tock tick tock
watch the clock
up, down, up, down.
Bottle labeled ‘drink me’

Comments

[purple_artemis00]

Quite a lot of abstractions and a series lack of imagery or metaphor. However, the tone is nice and the subject intriguing. The speech (in italics) is my favorite part because it's much clearer than the rest of the poem. The repetition is also nice.

[Ledah and Lucifer]

nice